Comments : Before I Say Goodbye

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    If this is true, and that someone struck blows, then you need to be rid of them, once and for all. Never take them back, because it won't stop. I really hope this was just a poem and not a chapter from your life.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad poem. If love is tearing you apart then it is not a thing to stay in.....The twist at the end is sad also. playing games with hearts can hurt more then the 2 involved.
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is a great write dear and a very good message too. Its always right to move on, its always hard but in the end a move made for the good and only future will answer that...so y putting present in pain.
    Awesome write indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Moving on is the tough part but necessary when it ends you know it. Good write

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Very well written and expressed... you're right , move on... life has more to offer, and you deserve the best. You're a winner! Keep smiling, and keep believing. A great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Freedom

    Amazing !!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by misti

    I loved this poem keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    People should just tell the truth even if it hurts us. 5/5, Em