I guess people really looked so much further beyond words than I do. Anyways, this was a great write no matter how short it was it was a great poem and you did well with it. Interesting word choice, too.
MaryAnne, thank you kindly for explaining this poem to me. I should have known that a sweet, innocent girl like you would not be using metaphors and that this was just a poem, like Tempsy stated also:)