Utter Depression

by MaSkEdSoUl   Sep 8, 2009


Stuck in a world,
No where to escape.

Putting on a smile,
Thats starting to look fake.

I'm hating the world,
I'm hating my life.

But most of all,
I'm hating myself...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    Really short but very to the point. gives a lot of emotion in the few lines, though the last line doesnt really fit.
    4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by cici89

    Short but well spoken. All flows good till the last line.. but good job.. dont hate yourself

    suicidalkansas

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Don't hate yourself. Don't be so depressed. Sometimes we all feel this way. But there's a way out. Keep writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    :(

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