Comments : Uncertain questions

  • 14 years ago

    by Stevie

    I love this one as well. There has yet to be a poem of yours I dislike.

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    "Why do I seek love?
    The word sounds so plain.
    I don't need a partner to be complete,
    Yet I feel empty without them". Yes indeed, we might not need a partner to feel complete, but what we needed is the sensation to feel being desire, care for, and that we're special. We all need someone to be here for that that gives us confident and the feeling of protection. 5/ 5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Ive noticed you have lots of questions in your poetry. Which means there are lots in which you still need to experience. your emotions are blooming and its just the beginning. you can live in a world the way you percieve it. Reality shows us that there are good things in life, but more unfortunate things to be had. In a way, that balance is best. for if we all experienced the good, at every given moment, then what joy are we granted when we get that moment of clarity and happiness. its to understand the rarity of things and how important they are once they finally come around. Your questions will be answered one day. just keep writing, and you will notice your poems bloom as your emotions do.
    Good write.
    keep up your philisophical ideals.