Comments : To Colour Outside The Lines

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I know what yu mean :'(

    Great job, as always

    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    "Praying like crazy you could break down
    and cry. Wishing, wanting, wondering why
    Not stable enough to stand on your feet
    Hiding from monsters under your sheet"

    Amazing Stanza, This whole poem was so great!