Comments : Our eternal last

  • 8 years ago

    by Sexual hysterias

    Aweh. I really enjoyed this. (:

  • 8 years ago

    by Jackie

    True love is never smooth, have to take the highs with the lows. Best advise is to talk and never go to sleep on an argument. A well written poem 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by bluehun

    Gr8 stuff luver xxx

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Beautiful! This is definitely one of my favorites... I looooove how this is not your average, typical love poem. You write about hurtful emotions as well and struggles people face in a relationship and thats what makes this poem so authentic and real. I could relate to it in so many ways. In fact, I'm going through something very similar at the moment!

    "We've both been hurt but it's made us stronger.
    We've both been in hurtful relationships but we'll last longer. "
    -I feel that this is the most true part in ur poem.. because that's what I really agree with as well! It's almost as though you've written my feelings out!

    That was my favorite part but I love the entire poem! Great job!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Siham

    Really wonderful poem , i like it so much i feel every single word , i added it to my favorites poem . Great job 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I can very much relate to that, I love the stuff you write. 5/5 dear!

  • 7 years ago

    by Randy East

    I really like the way you write poetry, Your poems flow very well, and there is so much passion in the way you portray things.

    ....thanks for reading so many of my by the way.

    its been my pleasure to return the favor.

    Randy

  • 1 year ago

    by yogi73

    I think this is well expressed....love is a rocky road and heavy load, and sometimes worth the journey