When You Feel

by Countess of Monte Cristo   Sep 11, 2009


When you feel you're alone in a bad world.
When all you once had is gone.
Remember that life has taught us.
That the darkest night precedes the dawn.

When you feel you are out of hope.
Remember that God is there.
Keep your faith strong.
Soon, he will answer your prayers.

When you feel you have no friend left.
And only enemies are near.
Worry not, my love.
For I'll always be here for you, dear.

Fear not, you are safe in my arms.
You will always find a home in my heart.
And i shall forever be your loyal one.
'Till death do us part.

*My heart is ever at your service. ~William Shakespeare

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A very sweet piece. Alot of people commit suicide because they think they are along when truly there is always somebody that cares very deeply for them. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This brought a tear to my eye. A loving poem.... that really touched my heart to read. You're an awesome writer Walah. I love your style.. and your wonderful quotes. All the best , and thankyou for such a wonderful write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Walah
    This is a lovely piece you penned.

    Fear not, you are safe in my arms.
    You will always find a home in my heart.
    And i shall forever be your loyal one.
    'Till death do us part.

    This stanza just brought it all together.
    Excellent!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lovely write of hope and encouragement
    for a loved one. Liked the quotes & the write.
    Take care :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A great write with a wonderful message. I could relate to being on the verge of giving up and hope seems so far out of reach yet you have to have faith and know you're not alone. I loved this write, could clearly hear the writers voice and it was full of such great advice and words. Well written. (:

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