Comments : When You Feel

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    God is always there and faith in Him sustains me. At times I start to slip into that dark night and lose hope, but only for a very short while. I quickly remember my faith in God and I surrender those dark hopeless things to him. This is a perfect reminder for me. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A great write with a wonderful message. I could relate to being on the verge of giving up and hope seems so far out of reach yet you have to have faith and know you're not alone. I loved this write, could clearly hear the writers voice and it was full of such great advice and words. Well written. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lovely write of hope and encouragement
    for a loved one. Liked the quotes & the write.
    Take care :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Walah
    This is a lovely piece you penned.

    Fear not, you are safe in my arms.
    You will always find a home in my heart.
    And i shall forever be your loyal one.
    'Till death do us part.

    This stanza just brought it all together.
    Excellent!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This brought a tear to my eye. A loving poem.... that really touched my heart to read. You're an awesome writer Walah. I love your style.. and your wonderful quotes. All the best , and thankyou for such a wonderful write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A very sweet piece. Alot of people commit suicide because they think they are along when truly there is always somebody that cares very deeply for them. 5/5, Em