Hillside whisper

by cory   Sep 12, 2009

You make the world go round and round
When your around, can't touch the ground
Lines are blurring
Drunk off love,
Our boundaries slurring

Make me whole
I'll set you free
Forever in love
Just you and me

The world spins so fast
I hold your hand, and watch it pass
I know that we will last
So an oath from me rose from the grass

I'll pick you up from every fall
No matter what
And through it all
I'll be near
To hear your call

So even when the ice is thin
Don't be scared
We'll fight together
And we'll win


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  • 8 years ago

    by ChaoticHeart

    Well done on the rhyming, loved the flow. This poem is full of so much love. Reminded me of how I felt long ago. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like how this piece flows and how expressive you are of your feelings. 5/5, Em x

  • 8 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Excellent poem. So beautiful and expressive, such sweet, pure undying love in every well written verse. :) Flawless flow, great pace, was a pleasure to read.