My Black Hole [Home]

by BlueEyedMystery   Sep 16, 2009


The tears flow together,
mingle in our dust
Left behind in our absence.
Love is never one to trust.
Help me, dear.
I can't seem to breathe,
But that doesn't matter
You're still going to leave
[me here to die].

Words don't mean anything
When the action falls short,
I don't need you
Anymore.

Let me fall..
..................
..................
..................
..................Into my black hole.

I need a new home.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    *really big sad face* Awwww this was a heartbreaker...but so beautiful. I love love love the way you wrote this!!! I think you did an amazing job with this. I've been seeing so many creative poems lately and this one was my favorite. The ending just crushes me. That's how powerful your words are. Wow!!! Amazing work love. Nik :)

  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Intense, meaningful, beautifully written, expressive, deep, insightful. Was a pleasure to read, each line was so full of emotion. Excellent poem.

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