Comments : Love Compared

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Very nice poem of the many different things that love can be compared to. I thought it was nice touch to add a question at the end of the poem. However, you spelled binoculars wrong. That is the only minor adjustment that would need to be made in my opinion. Otherwise a very nice write and much enjoyed.

  • 8 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Yeah lol i figured i spelled it wrong, I was going to spell check it but I didn't have the time

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I agree with Kay, I like the way you compared love to objects and things. The rhymes did not sound forced, the cadence/flow was good, idea was communicated very well and the ending gives the reader something to think about. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A wonderful poem. :) Great rhyming and flow throughout, and so well written and expressed. . I loved it! You're quite a writer ;) A great job!