Comments : Scared to lose you

  • 14 years ago

    by Liz

    Mann, i wish iii could've wrote this. you have no idea how i feel the exact same way lately.

  • 14 years ago

    by Unknown

    Wow wow wow .
    thats totally how im feelinn and its amazing that you put it into words and made it an awesome poem!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephen

    My god lady, I love you! This is so wonderful. I can relate to this perfectly even though you are talking about a guy in your life. I've went through the same experiences and had those same feelings about a female friend of mine.

    And I'm so scared of losing
    So scared of you leaving me
    So scared that if you leave
    I wont be able to breathe

    Those were the most amazing 4 lines to end a poem I've ever read. It just put closure to everything you talked about during the poem, very great job. 5/5 :)