One tear.

by Black Heart Still Beating   Sep 20, 2009


Do you see the way I stair,
At nothing at all?
Dont you relize,
That you kill me.
_______________________ One tear

falls down on,
my pillow.
They seem to change
From rage to serender,
_______________________ at

this time of night.
So I let them fall,
past my eyes and nose.
Way, way past
______________________ a time,

When I still cared
What you thought
about me,
So please go
_____________________ fall off

a cliff.
This time you wont
get me to plaster
a smile on
____________________ my face.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    This is amazging I love it sweetie(:

    5/5 from me....

    Xx

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    I love your writing. all of it. keep up the great work...

    your writing just really speaks to me...and im not suprised, seeing that we're both teenage girls; im 13, ur 14.

  • 14 years ago

    by NaeNaeConspiracy

    Aye-May-Zing 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Try not to cut the sentences too much. it made perfect sense. i liked it. but you can improve the lines a bit ok.

    *Val

  • 14 years ago

    by Jackie

    Different format for a poem, but it works. Very good poem, 5/5

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