Comments : My escape

  • 7 years ago

    by XxTwisteDxxMinDxX

    This is really good. i can relate. my bf is the only thing in the world that can save me from my own personal hell. it's amazing the power of love, huh? Good job.

  • 7 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem really touches me by it's sadness. The hidden pain behind the scene. We all needed someone, and there are times we found this special person who is the onlyone that can save us. Onething we should all keep in mind, is that, no matter how hard our sadness are, there are those who are going through harder times than us. Keep on writing, it has lots of healing effects. Love your work, 5/5, kel.

  • 7 years ago

    by bluehun

    Love ur style of writting,....love can be so so much of a saviour

  • 7 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think everybody feels these emotions and the poem is very relatable for almost everyone I'd say. We always want that special someone to come and save us from the nightmares that are our lives. Always capitalize I because its you and its always capitalized no matter when or where. Great job 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Ken

    I can relate to this poem very much. It makes me think of my and my girl friend and how see just brings me out of me spiraling down fall. to some it all up in one word I would have to say perfect.

  • 7 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I have a friends of mine that just barely keep me out of depression but I have this ONE friend that if i talk to I feel automatically great and warm inside. I love her and i can really relate
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    It's just weird how love can make the worst things seem like nothing at all. I loved the way you used your love to mask the pain...just beautifully written. Amazing. 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    A beautiful piece of pain, and love. How deep can "want" and "need" be? It is said that pain and love go hand in hand. Sometimes mistaken for one another. Like the way laughter, when recorded, will sound like crying when played in reverse. You did a wonderful job. A very relative piece.

  • 7 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    Escapism at its finest (welcome to my world!)

    5/5
    the Riddler

  • 7 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love the message... It was the poem I can relate about... Actually I was a bit confused when I read your first lines... But the ending was absolutely brilliant... The story was really capturing... I can feel the sadness inside... The ending had me amazed, so 5/5 worth here...

  • 7 years ago

    by IMMORTAL PAIN

    Wow. me and u have 2 complete different styles of writing. but coming from a poet with a different style i have got to say i love the way you show your feelings in this write. amazing. im going to favorate you <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This is very heart felt and uses a lot of imagery, If i had any suggestions it would be to add some punctuation to make the read a little less fast paced.

  • 7 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Nice, Good play on the proes. I could get a clear image of what was happing in the poem I think your wrote it very well.

    My favorite lines were:
    tomorrow I'll cover the marks
    and act as if I'm fine

    It reminds me of a quote I saw saying what did you think the bracelettes were for?

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Short and sweet... Full with love... In short its awesome (5/5)

  • 7 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Wow, this poem has so much emotion behind it. I think it is very well written. You had some very strong lines among the whole piece!

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I pay no mind
    to the blood flaking from my skin
    ^^ i do not think i have ever heard it described like that i thought it was original and it grabbed my attention.

    this short of nothing
    living hell
    ^^ sounds like some of my bad days. i think everyone can relate to this feeling of being in a living hell it was a phenomenal way to describe it

    I think everyone knows the feeling of needing someone to take them away and be their escape. those type of people make this world bearable and if you have someone like that, hang onto them. I thought your writing was great. The only thing i would suggest is separate things into stanzas other than that amazing : )

    5/5 !! for sure

  • 7 years ago

    by Ash

    I really liked this. I know exactly the emotion you put out in this poem. 5/5 :)

  • 6 years ago

    by lizzy

    Wow.very emotonal. very powerful