This poem really touches me by it's sadness. The hidden pain behind the scene. We all needed someone, and there are times we found this special person who is the onlyone that can save us. Onething we should all keep in mind, is that, no matter how hard our sadness are, there are those who are going through harder times than us. Keep on writing, it has lots of healing effects. Love your work, 5/5, kel.
I think everybody feels these emotions and the poem is very relatable for almost everyone I'd say. We always want that special someone to come and save us from the nightmares that are our lives. Always capitalize I because its you and its always capitalized no matter when or where. Great job 5/5
A beautiful piece of pain, and love. How deep can "want" and "need" be? It is said that pain and love go hand in hand. Sometimes mistaken for one another. Like the way laughter, when recorded, will sound like crying when played in reverse. You did a wonderful job. A very relative piece.
I love the message... It was the poem I can relate about... Actually I was a bit confused when I read your first lines... But the ending was absolutely brilliant... The story was really capturing... I can feel the sadness inside... The ending had me amazed, so 5/5 worth here...
Wow. me and u have 2 complete different styles of writing. but coming from a poet with a different style i have got to say i love the way you show your feelings in this write. amazing. im going to favorate you <3
I pay no mind
to the blood flaking from my skin
^^ i do not think i have ever heard it described like that i thought it was original and it grabbed my attention.
this short of nothing
^^ sounds like some of my bad days. i think everyone can relate to this feeling of being in a living hell it was a phenomenal way to describe it
I think everyone knows the feeling of needing someone to take them away and be their escape. those type of people make this world bearable and if you have someone like that, hang onto them. I thought your writing was great. The only thing i would suggest is separate things into stanzas other than that amazing : )