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by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Sep 26, 2009
Sadness, depression /
Empty promises and lies
These build up your form
Cold summers and bittier winters
Swirl inside your soul
Trust and forgiveness
No longer belongs in me
Your world lies beneath
The earths darkest sea
In my eyes now
You are nothing more
Than in my deepest memories
A shadow on the wall
So walk away from me
And take everything that is you
For to gain entry to my life
There is nothing you can do
"Cold summers and bittier winters
Swirl inside your soul"
That's my favourite bit. Well written and similar to how I write too..
by Daylight Lucidity
Beautifully written... Great job
by Acoustic Odyssey
-sigh- I can relate to this. Some people just don't know when to stop. They think just because you forgave and let them back in once, you're like a revolving door.
The whole poem is awesome. Sad words used perfectly to make one sad yet beautiful poem. For sure Ill be coming back to read more from you. Great.
by Renegade Angel
You are nothing more than my deepest memories..
my favorite line. i love it, very deep aura and captivating..