Autumn Gypsy

by Meena Krish   Sep 29, 2009


Emerald youths
fresh and vibrant
their worries swing freely
to the winds tunes

Months pile up
one after the other
as seasons chase to capture
their carefree days

Birth of Autumn dawns,
youths of yesterday
begin to show sorrow
like lines upon a page

Crippled with age
their once forgotten worries
for the world to see
turn orange, yellow and red

Autumn gypsy in all her glory
twirls her colorful skirt
with a dance of lively chill
she enthralls earth from above

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  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Vivid imagery and excellent use of a metaphor! Congratualtions on the well deserved win!

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Now I could swear I commented on this .. but now I see I didnt and feel terrible about it. Congrats first of all on the win, very very much deserved!! (: Awesome write, really unique poem with original descriptions..made it extremely difficult for me to pick my favorite line.
    Great work!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Meena !
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wtg, Meena;)

    Well deserved, dear lady.

    God bless:)

    Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Congratulations on the win.
    A very deserving win at that.

    Take Care,
    Kay