Comments : Break her heart, and ill break your face!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    Comment, please!

  • 14 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Strong, feelings from a strong writer.
    I take personal understanding to this because it relates to my life right at this moment lol

    Keep it up!
    && I'll keep reading, promise.

    XoXo

  • 14 years ago

    by Madison

    I love it, youd be amazed how many guys feel the same way,but hitting a woman is never ok, heart break swings both ways, guys are just better at hiding the pain

  • 13 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Love does mean sticking up for your friends. You captured that honestly.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I liked it.

    Just a few misspells

    Second line :
    "I meen…" It should be mean.

    six line:
    " They don't know how it feals" it should be feels.

    eleven and twelve…
    Just the dosn't to doesn't

    haha.. I like how you use the ( bad word ). Though that distracted me a little. I know a bit contradictory on my part.