I want REVENGE

by Samuel Dimafelix   Oct 1, 2009


I am stranger in your land,
but I am happy to know you all.
I introduced myself to be a friend
but you laugh; because

my language is not good as yours

I wrote a piece dedicated to you
spent a lot of time to make it right
used 100 dictionaries to let you know
only to say that you are special

I look for you all around
to gave you this piece that came from my heart.
you tear my piece for everyone to see
and told me "go to school and study english please!"

I ran and ran going nowhere
looking for a help but nobody can.
asking to myself why he did this to me
I cant find any answer only want revenge

I cast a spell to summoned the God of Death
Dealing my life for his help
teach me how to take revenge
to make a master piece that you will never forget!

I used my pad and pen to make the piece of revenge
but the God of Death told me that this is not the best
so I prick my hand and tear my shirt
death told me "Use your blood to elavorate all that hurts!"

I used it to write the words that you will not forget
the words of pain that so really really hurt,
now the blood in my hand start to play.
to write the words "I am sorry I can not take revenge!"

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  • 14 years ago

    by Andrew

    This was deep u really didn't hold back good poem because u expressed your deep and true feelings, a lot of people in your position would had tried to harm themselves from feeling this sadness but instead u use poem as a way of release good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    So much pain in this piece. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    A piece that is filled with emotions. Well done, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I really found a lot of empowerment in your words. You wrote with so much feeling and you were able to bare your thoughts and feelings on the subject at hand. Though sometimes we want revenge, we find it in our best interest that the universe will handle everything appropriately for us in time. This poem was definitely a thought provoking, powerful write. There is so much depth and pain within the words and as it turns out the words were a release of the feelings, which I am very glad you shared with us.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice job nightsan
    We can all relate to negative comments. Just need to learn from them. Take care

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