I loved this. I felt you didn't hold back and that's what a real poem is about. You wrote from the heart and that's all that really matters. A very sad poem indeed just bursting with original images and ideas. I love the part when you say you're sorry you can't take revenge. A wonderful poem hun. *huggles* Nik

It's a good thing that even someone hurt you, you still made an effort to express your feelings through this poem. i think you should say thanks to that person because if he didn't hurt your feelings you won't have a poem like this. somehow, he became your inspiration to not give up and still go on with what you do. you are doing the right thing, take those not-so-good-comments as a challenge. never lose hope. you still have your friends here to support you. goodluck :)

An honest and yet painful poem; This took courage!

Such a sad poem and I like it so much

Nice job nightsan
We can all relate to negative comments. Just need to learn from them. Take care

I really found a lot of empowerment in your words. You wrote with so much feeling and you were able to bare your thoughts and feelings on the subject at hand. Though sometimes we want revenge, we find it in our best interest that the universe will handle everything appropriately for us in time. This poem was definitely a thought provoking, powerful write. There is so much depth and pain within the words and as it turns out the words were a release of the feelings, which I am very glad you shared with us.

A piece that is filled with emotions. Well done, kel.

So much pain in this piece. Well written, 5/5. Em

This was deep u really didn't hold back good poem because u expressed your deep and true feelings, a lot of people in your position would had tried to harm themselves from feeling this sadness but instead u use poem as a way of release good job