Jeff
What a sad poem. It is always painful to lose someone we love. The sad emotions can be felt in your words.
Good Job!
Take Care
Cindy

Thank you Karla, I think I needed a kick in the ass like that.

A very sad tale... of love lost... could feel the heartbreak in your words...
wonderful write...

Karla has the best advice. As difficult as it is, moving on is the best thing for you. Well done.

I really enjoyed the simple structure of this poem. No fancy poetic devices or rhyming schemes to distract the reader. It sucks when you lose that closeness with someone you've been together with and really fallen for. Keep writing. It sucks to be burned, but next time use sunscreen =). Best of luck.

Thanks Kurt, next time i`ll use lots of protection... :)

This is really sad, but if we have the courage to move on and put it in the past it isn't so bad afterall and in time the pain will go away and we'll find someone new. Well done. (:

There is a lot of hurt in these lines but it won't last forever, nothing does. Keep up the great writing.