Comments : Where You Lead (Swap Quatrain )

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    This is an excellent poem Cindy, not just technically but also the meaning in the words.
    And thanks for your comment on my win

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Clap Clap Clap. Loved this Mizz Cindy. 5/5..Countess

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    What a wonderful Swap Quatrain you have
    penned! Your words were simple yet truthful
    & I like the feeling it produced..well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is an awesome poem yaar. Excellent piece of work indeed. Loved this stanza the most

    My soul will go where you lead
    Life full of happy times all we need
    Forever together hearts aglow
    Where you lead my soul will go

    Loved it. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Cindy, you did a good job with the form. Such a feeling to have for someone, where you lead, I will go. True love indeed.

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Cindy,
    What a touching poem that shows the depth of emotions in this thing we call love. Wonderful write dear as always.

    Love Ya,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    All I can say is it's touching and beautiful

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Aww cindy that is so touching.. A longing 4 love and companionship could be felt through ur words... Such a beautiful write..

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was truly beautiful Cindy. I must say, anyone who has felt your friendship or love is a very lucky person. You are an awesome person. Your words are so touching, you have a good heart. Well done this was great! (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Walk Away Soul

    Let's run away make our escape
    Shut the doors , close the drapes
    In each others arms we'll stay
    Make our escape let's run away

    Everythings all good here. You had a pretty well rhymed stanza, and nice word usage. Your only errors is to take the ' out of Let's. Add a comma behind "away, others, and escape". That's it. Good Job.

    Hide me from this painful life
    Have love erase all our strife
    Where your smile is all I see
    From this painful life hide me

    Perfectly written. Excellent. Put a comma behind life. That's it. Great.

    My soul will go where you lead
    Life full of happy times all we need
    Forever together hearts aglow
    Where you lead my soul will go

    Great write. You just need to add a comma behind "together" in the third stanza, and another one behind "lead" in the last line.

    This poem was beautiful my friend. I loved it. You had minor erros, but this one deserves to be perfect. Nicely written. 5/5