No Goodbye

by Samuel Dimafelix   Oct 6, 2009


I saw a boy alone in the park
looking up in the sky
i secretly stared at him for a while
he kept on looking at the sky
and eventually he vowed his head and cried

i went to him and ask him "WHY"
He looked at me and paused for a while
i saw on his brown eyes the depth of loneliness he felt inside
and then he told me "I WANT TO DIE"

i eagerly asked him for the reason why
and then he answered me
"THE LOVE OF MY LIFE LEFT ME WITH NO GOODBYE"

-nightsan
12:32 PM 10/06/2009

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mikaela DLC

    A very nice read!!

    i liked the way your poem turned into a mini story and it flowed very smoothly.

    hhahaha. nice job!!!

    :)

    Better watch your grammar ok?

    hahahaha. i love it.

    ~mika

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Oh my gosh! - this is the best ive read from you by far! great structure, nicly worded and very strong/emotional. a great read! well done. IBE

  • 14 years ago

    by Oguz kaan

    Its certain deserves with beatiful grammar good vote=)!

  • 14 years ago

    by Oguz kaan

    Good jop!really!bravoo

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Good work deary :) this was really said but like Melody said your grammer is getting so much better. I felt you did a nice job of explaining the pain this boy felt. I can really relate to what you're saying. Keep it up hun :) Nik

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