Wow very good poem loved every part of it

Wow, i loved this, when i started reading it i couldn't stop. loved the flow and story to it, great work 5/5

That was so AMAZING!! Really good job. I loved it!

Goose bumps. That's the first thing I felt when I finished reading your poem. Well written. 5/5

Really touching. It gave me goosebumps :(
Amazing poem though :)

Wow that brang tears to my eyes. Very good write, congratulations. xx

Aww; very touching.
Beautifully penned.
5/5