You are the master of sad poems. It has been a while but you did not disappoint. Well done.

Really enjoyed this poem nice pace and flow. The only thing that gives the reader a slight awkwardness is the line;

"that a god there I face" it just seems to interrupt the flow with the word 'that', or maybe it's just the way I'm reading it. Otherwise great job!

Wow this was really deep, good choice of words 5/5

Great poem.. no more can i add. just keep it up.