OMG !! dis poem made me cry... i no hw u feel i lost my brother... i really sorry for your lost.. im sure your nan loved you soo much..just stay strong and everything will be allright .. x

Wow....I really don't know what to say but wow. This was such a deep poem. I felt so much sadness in this piece that I'm sad myself. I'm about to feel your pain and picture you with your grandmother. I too have lost a grandmother and I know how intense that loss can be. You did a wondeful job with controlling your emotions here and making them seem so real. I'm also in a drama class and I know that when I have to write something that i have to perform later that I don't hold back and you didn't. That's what makes this poems so good is that you didn't hold anything back. I respect you so much for that. I'm sure it took a lot to write this. This was amazing. One of the deepest poems I've read in a long time. Keep it up hun. *hugs* Nik