Don't Leave Me

by Loveless Dreamer   Oct 22, 2009


Please don't leave me!
Every time we fight
& every time you walk out
on me
and leave me in this haunting
empty house
I am left alone with nothing
but my old friends
who are so charmingly, calling me
and they are glinting so beautifully
in the light
and I have to admit
I want to feel them
I need to feel them
slicing through my flesh

Every time you leave
I am one step closer
to another scar
to the end
of all these years
of being free from their charm

Please don't leave me alone
I can't handle us fighting
Your harsh words
being alone

I need you!!

Mommy, don't go.....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was such a touching piece. Your words are so vivid and really make me feel what you're feeling. Like IBE said the last line sis very hard hitting and almost reminds me of a little kid crying after it's mom. Very sad but powerful piece. Keep it up. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow, that last line was very unexpected and it caught me offguard, very well done. the only improvements i would suggest, is toning it down, for a poem like this, less is more.good work. IBE

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Your expression is beautiful Val.
    I don't want you to feel like this though.
    I want you to know I'll always be here for you no matter what ok Val?

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This gives more support to my theory about a void. Perhaps even feelings of rejection

    I find it hard to love your pseudo friends as I believe you should

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