This gives more support to my theory about a void. Perhaps even feelings of rejection

I find it hard to love your pseudo friends as I believe you should

Your expression is beautiful Val.
I don't want you to feel like this though.
I want you to know I'll always be here for you no matter what ok Val?

Wow, that last line was very unexpected and it caught me offguard, very well done. the only improvements i would suggest, is toning it down, for a poem like this, less is more.good work. IBE

This was such a touching piece. Your words are so vivid and really make me feel what you're feeling. Like IBE said the last line sis very hard hitting and almost reminds me of a little kid crying after it's mom. Very sad but powerful piece. Keep it up. Nik