Comments : Golden Leaves and Bare Trees (Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Very nice Haiku. It is as though the trees shed their clothes. Wonderful write.

  • 14 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Haiku's are my favorite form and you penned an excellent one here!! Can vision the leaves and naked trees. Great job!!

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    Excellent haiku, the suggestion of sensuality is very clever.

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Again, in Florida this is not something we experience. I took a trip to Georgia a couple of years ago and the ride there and home honestly put me in amazement...fall must be the more beautiful time of year...nice write! The style (being that it's so short) didn't leave me wanting more or feeling as though I was left hanging...I could imagine what you were seeing. Your poems are reminding me of so many things HAHAHA Sorry to be rambling./