R.I.P

by Jasmine   Oct 25, 2009


Life is short i guess i learned
that the hard way.

I cant put what i feel into words
like i said life is short and death
has no age.

All i wish was that i wasent doing
this poem for you but i am to show
my respect.

God i only wish it wasent u i miss u
so much i cry every night but i know
my tear wouldnt bring u back.

I think iam going crazy i hear u and
see u sometimes is it u or my mind.

I cant do this any longer i miss u so
much and when i cant take it any
longer i guess i'll se u sooner.

This is for you my brother, my friend,
my very thing.

R.I.P SMILIY U ALWAYS IN MY HEART

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Yeah i know its wack but its what i have to say
I edit hope u like it.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Wow. This was beautiful. Great work
    You have potential and I hope you build on it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    This was great....very beautiful! i gave you a 5 hun.

    *Val

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Very beautiful write of what you want to say to your brother. Well done, 5/5. Em