Good Seeing You Today

by Countess of Monte Cristo   Oct 25, 2009


It was good seeing you today
I didn't expect you would be there.
I wish i could have dressed much better,
I wish i would have fixed my hair.

You came so suddenly and shaked my hand,
And my face quickly turned red.
I wish it were just you and me,
We got caught up in a crowd instead.

You are almost the man of my dreams,
Near to perfect as my knight can be.
I doubt there's anyone like you,
Though they say there's plenty of fish in the sea.

You are intelligent,
And you respect my dreams.
But i don't know if you feel the same towards me,
I guess I'll never know..It seems.

In any case, it was enough,
Your hand shaking mine.
But I'm very curious whether you like me or not,
Only if i can see the signs.

It was good seeing you today,
You are almost the man of my dreams.
But i don't know if you feel the same towards me,
I guess I'll never know..It seems.

*Dedicated to a certain someone. I always admired that man, his intelligence, his chivalry, his manners, his knowledge.. i can go on and on. Most importantly, his impressive and charismatic personality. Very manly but in a non-cheesy, non-tacky way.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is really wonderful & is a cliff hanger but it's a good one lol. The only thing I can think of to improve is the first line of the second stanza the word "shaked" should quite possibly be "shook." Other than that another perfect piece from you. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww this was just adorable.. haven't we all been in your position before ;) hope all works out great for you!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    And shook my hand
    I hate unfinished poems guess we will never know the outcome of you tet-a-tet, HA! HA!
    The poem though was good and overall it structure was okay though its meter was a little broken definitely not rhyming. a good effort 4/5 Ray S

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The man of your dreams...nicely penned,
    where emotions & thoughts are weaved into
    one..good write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice. I think I remember a person that I felt this way about before. You always wish you had taken just a little more with your hair, dressing, etc., Well done.

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