You is not spelled yuo it is spelled you.

Watch your (I's)

Beware your tenses. I understand that you used yesterday, today, and tomorrow in your poem. However in the tomorrow section you wrote in past tense.

Sorry if I'm being picky.
Anyway your poem is cute.

May your eraser never out live you pencil.

>-Spirit->

This is o sad and I know how it feels great expresions here with ur words 5/5

there is on misspelled word you on line 7

This was a unique and relatively original idea. I like the idea of describing three different times and then depicting how the storyline and plot changes with every new development.

There are a few mistakes, however. For example misspelled you below "Today.." Also I noticed that the last stanza, which was supposed to be the future, was using past tenses. This isn't a huge mistake but it does detract slightly from your unique style.

Those are merely suggestions of course. This was well written and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. 5/5

It's amazing how on a daily basis our life, love or something else changes. Beautifully written and a good choice of words. 5/5, Em

This poem is very deep and that's what I like about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina

Simple, sad yet so nicely written.

all the best and take care

It is just nirvana , pick a random one , and make up her in your rainbow mind , with the past thoughts , undress the lies , and past a little blaste of joy 5/5

Love the set up of this poem, - yesterday, today and tomorrow - i love it. the words are a little corse but i understood what you meant. nice 1! IBE