Yay you used my title. A very wonderful piece. Nothing I read matched this, that's why it won. Such detail and the imagery was flawless. A very well done piece. You really understood the use of fire and I love the creative way you wrote about it. Amazing work deary :) Nik

First I would like to say there was a consistent flow of your words, they seemed to move on to higher heights like flames. I loved the emotion that stood in between the lines, it was so eminent and spoke out to the reader. The imagery was there also and you gave just about every thought that passed through your mind. This brought the reader so close to being in your footsteps.

Excellent work, I have no suggestions.

~MaryAnne