Invincible is my princple.

by The Poetic Child   Nov 5, 2009


Un-breakable untouchable, no one can break me
No one can hurt me and yet no one can take me
Guarded by locked doors, walking in a free spirit
Humming my Music, and only I can really hear it

I walk proudly by faith, and never by my sight
I'm a free spirited bird, now let me take flight
Let me soar in the sky, leave my problems aside
and watch them from afar, as my problems divide

Let the wind blow past my body, to feel the breeze
looking at my trial's and tribulations, they all freeze
they're frozen they're gone, washed away at the sea
happy and glee, my problems are just not a part of me

I'm strong, I am Courage! I just cant back down
Cause I'm free from misery, with God in my background
so problems come at me, i will stay being invincible
you cant make me or break me, I have my principle

The principle of pride, to stand up and fight
To relinquish my pain, And i emerge strong at night
And when I emerge, my problems are no longer here
and I arise un-touched, and this demands so clear

I will no longer be weak, and I speak it right now
No one will change my way of thinking, not right now
I Claim Victory over Misery, too clear to be a mystery
I am invincible, no more problems come to visit me

INVINCIBLE IS MY PRINCIPLE!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Optimism is the way forward lol. Well written. I liked this poem, everything about it was amazing. Flow, rhyme and the words you used. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Omg was this ever amazing. Long time since I read something from you TPC but this one was wonderful; awesome work. Very optimistic and well done. Nice to see such a positive write :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha, this was really cool:)

    It reads like something a boxer or artist says to himself in the mirror before he goes out there and knocks them dead..

    A well written poem, I enjoyed it very much.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    I thought this was amazing. You told me straight up , HEY, you cant break me!. lol

    " walk proudly by faith, and never by my sight
    I'm a free spirited bird, now let me take flight
    Let me soar in the sky, leave my problems aside
    and watch them from afar, as my problems divide"

    I really like this stanza because it shows to me that maybe faith controls the problems if you let it. Or as someone would say God.
    How happy and free you are when your not worrying abotu them all the time.

    Also I like " .. and only I can hear it"
    We are our own person so truly, we would be the only one to really know.

    I'd write more but I have to switch classes xD
    So thankyou for the write. :P

    -Angela

  • 14 years ago

    by TheRaven

    This is by far the greatest poem i have ever read...thank you so much!!!!!!

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