Comments : Lonesome loneliness

  • 12 years ago

    by pieces of joshua

    Your poem makes colors swirl in my head.. dark shades, perhaps smoke. Beautiful insanity.

  • 11 years ago

    by WW

    I really like this sense of flowing minimalism I got from this, like each of the two lines, all of them calmly vague paint a very deep picture for me. Thank you for sharing!