Comments : To Them These Streets Belong

  • 14 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Wow, thats all i have to say
    thank you for your comment
    your poems are amazing i like this one so much
    awesome writing

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    This is another excellent piece, Jenn. A very important message, what we leave behind for the children, after all they are the future of the world.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Jenn, congrats on your challenge win. Such a touching read this is and so very deserving of the win.

    Children dying
    Just to hope
    Inside a world
    That cannot cope
    ^^^
    Loved the ending, touching !

    You have given the reader much t think about Jenn.

    Well done my friend !!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    A moving and effectively delivered contemplation...

    I offer:

    "The best way to fight evil is to make
    energetic progress in the good.."
    -I Ching

    Imagine!