Every Rose Has Its Thorn

by Melpomene   Nov 13, 2009


I once,
placed his heart
neath a
black light
and he glowed
like a scorpion
producing heat
within the night.

a prevaricator.

When fear
ignited his eyes
he stung himself
to sleep,
a death stalker
in the shadows
living for
exotic trade.

Venomous.

I was
paralyzed by charm,
lured by seduction
He became like a
spider spinning
webs in
Morpheus's house.

He bled
my lips dry,
with arrogance
upon his face.
and they say
"every rose has its thorn"
Well my scorpion
he has his bait.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    First of all, I'd like to say that the opening stanza was just beautiful, you did know how to catch attention.

    "a prevaricator."
    ^Thank you for teaching me something new!

    Your ending is just as beautiful as the opening. I love your title, catchy too.
    I have one criticism though. I noticed that you used "I once" and "I was" at the beginning of the stanzas in another few poems of yours, I'm used to your style so it was a little bit trite to read those lines again. For a first-time reader, they won't get to notice this of course, but you did repeat them in several poems. Try to avoid repetitions.

    Well done Mel (:
    Write on~

  • 14 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is a good piece. I liked the originality and the word choice really sent the message home. I will say that the flow seemed a little off, and made it hard to read. still a good piece though.. keep it up!

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