A truly wonderful piece about being judged by the one you love, 5/5. Em

Such a very sad write. Perhaps I am interpreting it wrong but it gives me the feeling that a relationship has ended. And the (she) in it begs to be set free, by meaning of ... she is not wrong (guilty) for loving and adoring the man she loves.

Pushed against her will,
to a place she'd forever lay.
One last look, last touch,
she tears herself into frays.
^^^
Pushed against her will in this part gives me the feeling that she did not want the relationship to end and was pushed away to sadness ... the place she would forever lay.

One last look, last touch ... gives me the feeling of him walking away leaving her alone ... and then she falls apart.

Very interesting read ! Very much enjoyed

Short yet sweet!
I love this poem, no dought.
keep up the good work, and dont stop writing.
You have some real potential.
:))
If you could comment one of my four latest poems it would be appriciated.

Btw:: im putting you in my favorites ;)
-jessss.