Unspeakable fear

by Fading Memory   Nov 14, 2009


Sitting front the wall
staring deep withing myself

i wounder how many days passed
instead of how many days left

everything seems to be meaningless
everyday is same with a bit sharper pain

thought i could kill my emptiness
but now i can't even know what i desire

the nothingness in my brain is growing stronger
and day after day the coldness is poisoning my being

beyond these words there is a real pain i feel
it hurts like no other thing keeps me awake

dry fear eating my mind , in my harsh loneliness
reasonless tears , burns my hope senselessly

apparently very happy and free spirit
but deep inside Drowning in my silent sorrow

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  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Very beautiful words,I got goosebumps reading this.the emptiness and loneliness resonates throughout the poem, there's the visual sense of darkness cut by a dull red light and silent tears being cried, this is truly a soul-drenched poem.ethereal, beautiful, slightly maudlin, borderline morbidity, but the intricate beauty just adds that silver lined touch that saves the work from becoming too morbid.your mind, as I envision it in reading this work, must be like a dark vacant land cut by smouldering, heated emotions and entwined with soft, cold loneliness.I love it, the poem, entirely refreshing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Skyfire

    "beyond these words there is a real pain i feel"

    Very, very touching.

  • 14 years ago

    by Beverlyn

    ...beautiful, full of pain and reality. It's really a good one.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sai

    The sadness is evident.

    Thanks for writing this, i love it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins

    This was really good. I loved it.

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