Luu, another wonderful piece from you yet filled with profound emotions. I felt the extreme pain while reading this, i hope i am mistaken...Also, i found this piece portraying regrets of what we could have done in the past...heartbreaking piece Lu...~~~hug~~~
What a heartbreaking piece you have penned. Your poems always reach in and touch the hearts of the reader.
Soul died ... pain lived !
Heaven and Hell collided ...
and until the last of the last
they would play in my memories.
We carry so many memories with us. So much pain along with all the wonderful happy times. The pain becoming a part of who we are. Living through the bad times helps us to stand stronger.
'the sun crumbled
with each drop of rain.'
^These lines blew me away, I have never heard of this expression used but I must say I adore it. Obviously when it rains, the sunshine goes away, what a unique way of describing this--the sun crumbling. You couldnt have described it any better!
'hearts can hang from the moon
yet, never see the stars.'
^Another very powerful, & original lines. Left me speechless & in deep thought.
Wow...you sure dont leave the reader with many words after reading this spectacular piece. I again apologize for not noticing this sooner, very very deserving. :]