Comments : Never Say Never

  • 8 years ago

    by The Queen

    Luu, another wonderful piece from you yet filled with profound emotions. I felt the extreme pain while reading this, i hope i am mistaken...Also, i found this piece portraying regrets of what we could have done in the past...heartbreaking piece Lu...~~~hug~~~

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    What a heartbreaking piece you have penned. Your poems always reach in and touch the hearts of the reader.

    Soul died ... pain lived !
    Heaven and Hell collided ...
    and until the last of the last
    breath -
    they would play in my memories.

    We carry so many memories with us. So much pain along with all the wonderful happy times. The pain becoming a part of who we are. Living through the bad times helps us to stand stronger.
    Excellent!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    What a train of thoughts you wove here. A very nice flow of emotions. Bravo!! Words perfectly chosen and in just the right places..

  • 8 years ago

    by th little lies

    Its Quite Meaningful (:

  • 8 years ago

    by The Queen

    Congrats on your win..very deserving..****hugs****

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win Luanne. It is a beautiful poem :)
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'the sun crumbled
    with each drop of rain.'
    ^These lines blew me away, I have never heard of this expression used but I must say I adore it. Obviously when it rains, the sunshine goes away, what a unique way of describing this--the sun crumbling. You couldnt have described it any better!

    'hearts can hang from the moon
    yet, never see the stars.'
    ^Another very powerful, & original lines. Left me speechless & in deep thought.

    Wow...you sure dont leave the reader with many words after reading this spectacular piece. I again apologize for not noticing this sooner, very very deserving. :]

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi. A beautiful poem, I can feel its emotions.

  • 6 years ago

    by Blissful

    "Amazing how
    hearts can hang from the moon
    yet, never see the stars."

    WOW. I'm speechless! That usually doesn't happen to me haha. That was beautiful! I have never read that anywhere else, it was a poem in itself.

    I am blown away.

  • 5 years ago

    by victor dyck

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  • 5 years ago

    by victor dyck

    Kindofpsychedelicsadexcelent