Comments : Ode to my twins

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Thanks Ingrid. (smiles) After your explanation, I understand what you are writing about, the link explains it as well. A woman would feel this way about her body parts, to lose one when God intended us to have two, could be a blow to our lives and we could feel disfigured and scarred. But with the support of loved ones, that can be overcome. Thanks for writing about this subject.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    All I can say is well-penned. You have explained this so well and I feel like I understand now the difficulty one woman would have to go through...Very well-thought out and meaningful, your words were understanding.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Clever and Unique

    Never seen a poem like this (topic)
    or of the meaning
    I enjoyed it
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Interesting work but I think the wording could be a little better.

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely ode to your...um - twins :-D

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Being a woman is not an easy task but
    through all the difficulties we undergo, our
    children make it all seem worthwhile! Liked
    the read..treasure your kids :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Whose showing their soft under belly now love the poem and it is not only mums who wish they cold stay in good health and watch their children grow. Excellent as always Ingrid a lovely tear drawing thought of a poem Ray S 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    I feel a sense of deep emotion while reading this beautiful piece Ingrid.
    The bond that exist between twins are clearly in the words you spoke here.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Amen to that, statement Ingrid.
    Look after yourselves ladies, i happen to be a huge fan of twins, yay twins forever. LOL.
    Well written Ingrid and it touches an important subject, in a way i don't think has ever quite been done before.

    Grant

  • 14 years ago

    by Liz

    This is a really deep, strong poem. i thought it was about your kids too, for a second lol.

    thank you for writing this, you are one of the best out there.

    love you always.
    take care of yourself!

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    A very excellent write! I enjoyed the last two lines, it tied it up very nicely.

    I haven't read your poems in a while, and it's nice to see some new ones! I love reading your work! 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I liked this poem for the fact that when reading it you have a certain interpretation but after looking at the link you understand the real meaning of the poem. Something I've never seen wrote about before--nicely done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was very cute and sweet :) A complete pleasure to read as always :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    This is lovely...You have expressed your feelings beautifully...God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Such a beautiful poem Ingrid, expressing the joys of being a woman and the femininity that womanhood brings, not only to the woman, but also to the man.
    (hope I can say that!)
    A truly beautiful piece of work here Ingrid.
    Well done!