Poem About Fresh Graduate

by FridusBlueheaven   Nov 20, 2009

I am still young and at a condition that still prime
An obsession occurred, keep thinking about it all time
It is a challenge for me just like a mountain to climb
To reach all those things I want is my final sublime

Twenty two and powerful, well that's all about me
Obviously I'm craving for everything I see
I want to be on top, simply reach the highest degree
Be the best among everyone, that's my ideology

Energetically I'm ready for bigger challenge
I'll be waiting for unfinished missions to rearrange
Even though diversity has come to a higher range
I'm brilliant and I'm ready to be an agent of change

Overpowered man and I'm ready to show you more
So fearless and I'll be craving for a higher score
I'm proud of myself, there are talents to explore
I'm more mature now, absolutely better than before

Freshman from the oven, I'm willing to discover
Once I may fall but I won't give up and say never
For all those troubles that I'm ready to take over
Let me show you that I'm able to give it the answer

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  • 8 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I agree with Karl. But rather then say should i would say we need to proud of what we accomplish but not to the extent where we become cocky but just proud enough to show people you believe in yourself. I don't but other people should do it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think we all should be proud of what we accomplish and strive to do even better. I thought the rhyming was awesome but the last stanza doesn't rhyme and I'm not sure why. Excellent job none the less and worthy of a 5/5