Not at all too deep for my taste

Deep mandarin melancholy, i've read this poem of yours a number of times, now feel i know it better..well a little and i can see something lying under the lilly pad just not sure what...

Quite a brilliant rant...I really must say..
'-)
I (too) will tred on nomadic..

"Live strive atone".......Indeed!

I like the oddball rhythmic style of the words you've chosen. well done