Comments : A November Garden

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Corinne,

    A resigned and contemplative write by you. Although it is short, it is packed with deeper meaning and much truth.

    Simone de Beauvoir once wrote a book called "tous les hommes sont mortels", which means as much as "All me are mortal" and it is the story of an Italian king, called Fosca, who discovers the horrors of being immortal, after drinking an immortality- elixer.

    We are meant to be here temporary...it is part of the beauty of being human.

    Still, there is something to be said
    For a finite life

    ^^

    Lovely, meaningful words from you, girl:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    * "All men are mortal" :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    Another beautiful piece. Your words echo your love of nature and the birds.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Although this was short it did have quite an impact. You took my eyes away from everything else and put me in your words. There was nothing ordinary of this piece, it was quite different and poetically calm. Beautiful work, great job!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Congrats Corinne, a well deserved win:)

    God bless,

    Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    How beautiful of a write this was...really great imagery & exactly what one would see looking outside their window on a November day. Congratulations on the win; well deserved! (:

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Congratulations on the win, God bless you!

    Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne Congrats on your win!
    (((hugs)))

  • 7 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //They will all return to resplendency
    When spring arrives again
    But I shall not//

    this is so beautifully penned... I read and re-read it... just loved these words... it makes me feel sad that we may not see spring year after year... sad for the finite life... but also feel glad that spring returns year after year...

    lovely write :)

  • 7 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on the win...well deserved!

  • 7 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Nice!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Melissa

    Congrats Corinne! This is such a beauty. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Congrats Corinne.A beautiful backdrop of nature blending with the truth which holds for all the beings on this earth.Enjoyed it thoroughly.God bless.