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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    That was very excellent indeed. I loved the repition through out. Some try to use it and it just doesnt work well, but this definetley did. And i didnt quite expect the ending but i loved it none the less. A well deserved 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Aww.
    That's really good :)
    It has the effect of sounding like a love story;
    Then ends with tradgety!
    ;) Love it.

    5/5