Oh, my. What wonderful words of a wonderful relationship. A whole life together in one poem. A wonderful piece.

Aw. . .it's so sweet i've always been a person to fall for the little things so much more them when people try to impress me and your poem was so sweet but i didn't expect it to end that way it made me sad but it was a great write

This poem is in perfect form and powerfully romantic

The flow is a little off , but that could be fixed by doing a syllable count and making a few lines longer. I really like how you seperated your ideas in the two line stanzas, it's effective on the way I read it .. And your rhymes are really good for the most part . This is a really cute poem , 5/5 .

This was a really cute poem. at the end of the poem im not really sure if it was a brakeup or a dying love kinda thing going on (: but either way this was beautiful and i really enjoyed it.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love forever and always
Katlynn Marie Plumadore

Great poem. nice flow and rhyme scheme was on point.
i gave it a 5/5

--kay jay

p.s. thanks for the rude comment. it was greatly appreciated.

This was beautiful!!! i really loved this! honestly! i want to live with this feeling even when i grow older!