A wonderful rhyming poem here, Cindy that is raw with emotion.
I love how the sadness of this piece subtly gives way to hope in the penultimate stanza
"You can't hurt me anymore" and then collapses completely in the last as hope wins out: "Look within and peace you'll find".
Even our darkest clouds are lined with silver.
Great write, great flow and wonderful sentiment. All the very best Cindy,
Awww... you've expressed such deeep emotions... feelings that i can relate to and have been feeling lately... I actually just wrote a poem trying to express my feelings, if ur interested its called "Senseless"
I really think you did a great job with this poem... You really show ur hurt feelings.. Great job