Comments : Why Hide Indeed!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sounds like a good place to have to retreat when things get overwhelming. Leaves the reader to decide where that place is. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a interesting write definatly, like Sylvia said it makes you wonder where this place really is. A bit of suspense & wonder at the end...loved that.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cherimari2

    Thank you Rainbow...Courageous...Andrea and Sylvia!

    The fact is...this place is almost tangent. I call it Lalaland. There there are moof-flowers...and I think I have a poem describing it.

    But really it is a whimsy. Smiles.
    Mari

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cheri
    Sounds like a awesome place to go when you feel life weighing you down :)
    Good job!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy