The way I love you... (rewrite)

by Mr Rhee   Dec 2, 2009


You don't know the things that
go through my mind when I look at you.
You don't know the way I smile
when I hear your name during the day.

If only you could feel my skin tingle
when you touch my hand with yours.
If only you feel my heart skip a beat
the way it does when you kiss me.

I wish you could see what I see
when I look deep into your eyes.
I wish you could feel the way I want to
see you around each and every corner.

I want you to feel what I feel
when you're in my arms every night.
I want you to feel so whole the way
I feel so whole when we hold each other.

Don't you love the way I love you
when I love you the way I do?
Don't you love the feeling of being
held by me, the one you call "lover?"

If I could do anything and everything
I would do it with you by my side.
If I could have anything I wanted
I would be happy with just you.

Maybe we can be in love forever
and on even into the next life.
Maybe we can hold each other's
hand every step of the way.

Would you be my lover for the rest
of my life and the rest of yours?
Would you be the one I call "wife"so
that I can be the one you call "husband?"

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Amazing write. I didnt have the chance to read the original but I think that you did a great job with this rewrite. I loved that fact that you kept it simple with your vocabulary, yet you still captivated the romance. Overall, very good job. 5/5