Comments : How did you sleep?

  • 8 years ago

    by jlucson

    Nice

  • 8 years ago

    by Lu

    It is so hard to imagine my cyber baby girl growing up *wipes tear*
    Only seems like yesterday you were spilling nail polish on your rug, and trying your hardest to find a way to get it off ... lol

    Touching read A.I.D
    Muahhhhhhh Momma loves ya

  • 8 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is going as one of my favorite
    poems. It's very sweet. (:
    Stop by my profile sometime. ^_^

    -Kayla

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wonderfully written poem & very true that when you are with someone you can't sleep properly for ages not that I've witnessed this for awhile, perfect. 5/5, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Kelly Zuch

    Omg this is amazing... good as job darl... this is just like how i feel atm bcoz my bf isnt here... when i went home to sleep i couldn't bcoz he wasnt there lol.... sad sad stuff lmao.. but that was a really good read...

  • 7 years ago

    by Brittany

    I loved it. I really did.

  • 7 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    So so good. Def one of my favorites.

  • 7 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    This is amazing 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the description in your poem, especially the part about holding the pillow in hopes it will feel just like them. Can't imagine how many people have done something similar to that over the years. This reminds me of the song but I like your version haha 5/5 Nice work

  • 7 years ago

    by chind

    Lovely, the first stanza, i loved it coz i can kinda relate :) ow man your poems just keep me coming back for more!! haha

  • 7 years ago

    by Daniel Mulvany

    Again, what a lucky guy. I don't think there are too many people who would read this who don't understand how different it feels to be alone in bed when for so long you've shared it with someone. It's a lonely feeling. Well put.

  • 7 years ago

    by Daniel Mulvany

    Again, what a lucky guy. I don't think there are too many people who would read this who don't understand how different it feels to be alone in bed when for so long you've shared it with someone. It's a lonely feeling. Well put.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    This is really good:) i can relate to this alot! yr very talented.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I say wauh, else I'm happy to have seen this poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Your those heavenly-love- moments can't be replaced by anything. But at least you were lucky that you got such moments. Your attachment for those moments is creating sorrow for you. "Attachment, not love, is the real killer.