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  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    Your begining was great
    That's why I read it haha. but the ending.
    This part right here:

    as days pass on by
    i can still recall
    the look on your face
    the question you stalled

    I just don't love you
    like i did before
    you left me with this
    unfamiliar pore

    ^that right there^, Hurt me BAD.

    Great poem, it was very well expressed.

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    OMG! i love it, it sad but i love it. the flow is perfect, and the words fit well with the emotions you show. great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow!! I loved this poem. I can totally relate to this one!! I thought the emotions were conveyed perfectly and the whole thing was awesome. It really is emotionally touching. Great job!!